Miss Morris's Comments

Excellent work Molly, you have use appropriate images to clearly communicate your character's personality.

Target - use fades and effects on your images to create a collage effect. This will help create an overall image rather than having separate images

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From Miss Morris

 

Brilliant work Molly, you have clearly identified appropriate locations, explained why they would be suitable and identified health and safety issues. You have also offered some solutions to the safety issues you have identified.

Target – describe the specific details in the location that will suit your mockumentary. This will help show a detailed understanding of what you want to create and how you are planning on achieving this.

M

Excellent work Molly, you have asked questionnaires about the demographic profile of your target audience and presented your results using graphs. You have also made some conclusions based on your data!

Target – ask questions that relate to the mockumentary so you can make decisions based on your understanding of your audiences likes and dislikes.

M