Monday 5 December 2011

script writing - in the cab.

INT.CAB-NIGHT.
LORAINE walks up old kent road, talking loudly in to her white blackberry torch. She sees a black cab & puts her hand out signalling she wants to get in.The cab stops in front of her & the man smiles awkwardly at her, she doesn’t take notice and jumps in the back.
CAB DRIVER:
Where to miss?
     LORAINE:
           136 fort road Bermondsey, please
              CAB DRIVER:
          Okay dokay. Where you going to at this time of night?
              LORAINE:
          Ohh. Erm.. im just coming home from work
The CAB DRIVER stares at her through the mirror then LORAINE catches him looking at her & he quickly looks away and carries on driving fast.
              LORAINE:
          (Worried) you was ment to turn left back there..

              CAB DRIVER:
          Not for where were going.. *Pulls a evil smile*
As the cab slows down, LORAINE realises he’s stoped in a empty car park.
              LORAINE:
          (crying) Please. Let me go, take my things if you want
          Please just don’t hurt mee..


this is another peice or script writing. about a lady that gets in to a cab, but the driver takes the wrong turn and starts driving out of town. this is still a working progress.

Script Writing - At The Bus Stop.

 EXT.BUSTOP – NIGHT.
ZOE sits at the bus stop.
MOLLY sits down next to her.
              ZOE:
So what did you want to tell me?
              MOLLY:
          Well..
          You know DOMINIC? i saw him in the park
earlier holding hands with REISS.
ZOE’S face slowly turns red with anger
              ZOE:
          Dont pee me off. Is that sket
serious?
MOLLY attempts to comfort ZOE by hugging her,
But ZOE pulls away and slowly starts to cry with anger
When ZOE looks up she see’s REISS walking on the other side
Of the road, REISS doesn’t see her at first because she is pinging on her blackberry.
              MOLLY:
          ZOE, is that REISS over there ?  
MOLLY points to the other side of the road
ZOE gets up and shouts over to REISS
              ZOE:
          (angry)Oi RIESS come here!
REISS suddenly looks around & see’s MOLLY & ZOE at the bus stop
Then smiles and crosses the road to see what ZOE wanted.
(Before REISS gets to the bus stop)
              MOLLY:
          (Wispers) What are you going to do ?
              ZOE:
          Don’t worry, you’ll see..
MOLLY looks confused
              MOLLY:
erm okay.
REISS gets to the bus stop & smiles at ZOE & MOLLY then looks at ZOE.
              REISS:
          Did you want to talk to me or something?
              ZOE:
          Erm yeah.. i heard you was in the park with DOMINIC & you was holding hands with him?
              REISS:
          Erm.. noo, who told you that ?
MOLLY’S face goes red.
ZOE turns &looks at molly confused.
              MOLLY:
          She’s a liar. Isaw her with my own eyes.
              REISS:
          But.
ZOE & MOLLY turn and look at REISS.                                          REISS:
          I did see MOLLY & DOMINIC on the swings in Michal faraday park the other day.
MOLLY turns around and sits at the busstop &puts her head down.
ZOE looks unconvinced.
              ZOE: Are you sure it was DOMINIC ?
              REISS:
          Look. Ieven have a picture.
REISS pulls out her blackberry torch & starts looking through her photos..

 - to format this i had to use the 'tab' button which is above the cap locks button, this script took a few lessons to work on..  at the top it says  'EXT.BUSTOP – NIGHT.' it is a called a slug line which tells you if the sene is inside or outside, night ot day' & where.