script writing - in the cab.

INT.CAB-NIGHT.

LORAINE walks up old kent road, talking loudly in to her white blackberry torch. She sees a black cab & puts her hand out signalling she wants to get in.The cab stops in front of her & the man smiles awkwardly at her, she doesn’t take notice and jumps in the back.

CAB DRIVER:

Where to miss?

     LORAINE:

           136 fort road Bermondsey, please

              CAB DRIVER:

          Okay dokay. Where you going to at this time of night?

              LORAINE:

          Ohh. Erm.. im just coming home from work

The CAB DRIVER stares at her through the mirror then LORAINE catches him looking at her & he quickly looks away and carries on driving fast.

              LORAINE:

          (Worried) you was ment to turn left back there..

              CAB DRIVER:

          Not for where were going.. *Pulls a evil smile*

As the cab slows down, LORAINE realises he’s stoped in a empty car park.

              LORAINE:

          (crying) Please. Let me go, take my things if you want

          Please just don’t hurt mee..


this is another peice or script writing. about a lady that gets in to a cab, but the driver takes the wrong turn and starts driving out of town. this is still a working progress.