Script Writing - At The Bus Stop.

 EXT.BUSTOP – NIGHT.

ZOE sits at the bus stop.

MOLLY sits down next to her.

              ZOE:

So what did you want to tell me?

              MOLLY:

          Well..

          You know DOMINIC? i saw him in the park

earlier holding hands with REISS.

ZOE’S face slowly turns red with anger

              ZOE:

          Dont pee me off. Is that sket

serious?

MOLLY attempts to comfort ZOE by hugging her,

But ZOE pulls away and slowly starts to cry with anger

When ZOE looks up she see’s REISS walking on the other side

Of the road, REISS doesn’t see her at first because she is pinging on her blackberry.

              MOLLY:

          ZOE, is that REISS over there ?  

MOLLY points to the other side of the road

ZOE gets up and shouts over to REISS

              ZOE:

          (angry)Oi RIESS come here!

REISS suddenly looks around & see’s MOLLY & ZOE at the bus stop

Then smiles and crosses the road to see what ZOE wanted.

(Before REISS gets to the bus stop)

              MOLLY:

          (Wispers) What are you going to do ?

              ZOE:

          Don’t worry, you’ll see..

MOLLY looks confused

              MOLLY:

erm okay.

REISS gets to the bus stop & smiles at ZOE & MOLLY then looks at ZOE.

              REISS:

          Did you want to talk to me or something?

              ZOE:

          Erm yeah.. i heard you was in the park with DOMINIC & you was holding hands with him?

              REISS:

          Erm.. noo, who told you that ?

MOLLY’S face goes red.

ZOE turns &looks at molly confused.

              MOLLY:

          She’s a liar. Isaw her with my own eyes.

              REISS:

          But.

ZOE & MOLLY turn and look at REISS.                                          REISS:

          I did see MOLLY & DOMINIC on the swings in Michal faraday park the other day.

MOLLY turns around and sits at the busstop &puts her head down.

ZOE looks unconvinced.

              ZOE: Are you sure it was DOMINIC ?

              REISS:

          Look. Ieven have a picture.

REISS pulls out her blackberry torch & starts looking through her photos..

 - to format this i had to use the 'tab' button which is above the cap locks button, this script took a few lessons to work on..  at the top it says  'EXT.BUSTOP – NIGHT.' it is a called a slug line which tells you if the sene is inside or outside, night ot day' & where.