treatment draft 1

Act 1:

It’s the first day of school and Bobbi is new to Bermondsey academy. Miss morris  gets a girl called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how the things work there. Amie and Bobbi bond really well and decide to have lunch together when all of the sudden Bobbi starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she’s doing when Amie makes a joke about Bobbi’s stomach, but Bobbi  doesn’t laugh and Amie realises that bobbi really is pregnant and Amy has promised to keep this a secret. However a boy that goes to the school over hears this and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi and she wants to stir things up.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside in the playground on a bench talking about their summer when all of a sudden the Kelly makes a comment about Bobbi being pregnant. This gets Bobbi really mad and angry and Bobbi walks over and raises her arm to slap her but Kelly stops her hand and pushes her to the ground. Bobbi lays on the ground moaning in pain while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help her up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls a teacher to call an ambulance as blood trickles form under Bobbi’s skirt.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance and is worried for her babies’ sake. She’s laying in the hospital bed when a doctor comes in and tells her that she has lost the baby. She starts to sob silently to herself as Amy comes into the room , hearing the bad news Amy hugs her & says by her side, then Aimee asks about the father of the baby,  Bobbi looks up, as she feels that Bobbi can trust Amy, Bobbi tells her about when she was raped by one of the foster carers